1. Persuasive Essay (art in schools)Check with Mr. R. or Incomplete
Dear congressman,
Do you no what its like to be a student at Eagles Peak Charter School with no grass and a little bit of P.E space?We need grass and more P.E space so we can stay in shape. We also need more equipment so we can play more games and have more fun and actually have fun in P.E and not be bored.I think are school should get money because one of our main concerns is our computers we have twenty-five computers counting the six that don’t even work and we have 75 kids at our school. When we take assessments on the computer most kids have to wait until others are done and that wastes a lot of time.All that time we could be learning new things but no we have to wait around. Being a student at Eagles Peak School is not always easy for everyone there’s like hardly any space its so crowded I love going to school there but its gets really loud cluttered and HOT there’s just to many kids and so little space.We need the money so we could change all this and make our school better.And more space so we could get more students to join our school.And the money will help our school a lot we could start after school activities, we could have dances, fundraisers maybe we could maybe even get our cafeteria open.
DUE NOV. 19 2008
SUMMARY [1]NON-FICTION & [2]FICTION
2. Plot Diagram (save as a .jpeg and post as a picture)
3. Response to Literature
Lord Of The Flies
In lord of the flies there are rough and good times they have in the book. But later they forget the past and pay attention to the present and future. Two of the main characters are Jck and Ralph. They are the only main characters in the story. Jack; is a stubborn and mean person on the other hand Ralph; is such a bossy person!!!!
Some of the bad choices they made, are when they kill Simon and Robert. The reason they killed them both is because the other kids thought they were the beastie.Most of the main topics in lord of the flies are when they find the beastie. They say in the book that the beastie is a boar . Or an animal that comes out of the water. And they said the nbewastie has claws mand evil eyes.!!
Some of the details in the book are very interesting to me!! Jack finds the conch shell, and they use it to start meetings! And another is when they use the conch and then kids start coming out of the forest out of nowhere.
At the end of the book, all of the boys cry because they finally get recued. And Simon actually lives at the end! And the final sentence is what Lord of the Flies actually means! It means just like any other fable and reveals to the reader an intimate,disquieting connection between all the inoccent.
4. Autobiographical Incident (problem that you confronted)Incomplete
5. History: 8th Grade: Declaration of Independence Project, American Revolution Project (word & excel parts), Constitution
My Constitution
The first tip that I would do is make plans when I become governor. And let people know that I will be ready when they vote. And other tips would be like……????
Second, you would have to have the right opinions on what you want to change in our country. You would even have to have a lot of ideas to run a country and to make the laws.
Third, option that I would do is really pay attention on what I would want to plan on being governor. And the most important thing that I would do is take care of the state and other relatives.
Fourth and last, is I would make sure that all people would be treated equally. And have the rights to do what they would like. But, I will make consequences on those who convict a murder or anything that is not good.
Fifth, is that I would like people to be cared for with these laws and follow them the right way. If there is someone that doesn’t follow the laws the right way that means consequences.
Sixth, is the last one that I would choose is to make sure that people like the way you are going to run it??
So if I were in actual debate I would make sure to do the right thing before I do it in my election.
By: Bridgette Cryar
The Declaration of Independence
In my own words
That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their Safety and Happiness.
When any kind of like destructive of any end, it is right for the people to the alter to abolish it. And to make a government, putting its foundation in supplements is organizing the powers in such form, as to them they shall seem to effect there safety happiness
King of Great Britain has forbidden his Governors to pass Laws of immediate and pressing importance, unless suspended in their operation till his Assent should be obtained; and when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to attend to them.
King of Great Britain has forbidden his governors to pass the laws of immediate and pressing importance, but if whom is suspended in their operation until his assent should be obtained; when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to go to them.
King of Great Britain; He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and sent hither swarms of Officers to harass our people and eat out their substance.
The king of great Britain erected multitude of newer offices, and had sent hither swarms of officers to harass, our people, and to eat out there substance.
He is at this time transporting large Armies of foreign Mercenaries to compliant the works of death, desolation, and tyranny, already begun with circumstances of Cruelty & Perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head of a civilized nation.
The king of great Britain as of this time transporting big armies of foreign mercenaries to compliant the works of death, desolation, and tyranny and already begun with circumstances of cruelty and perfidy paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the head of a civilized nation.
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DUE: 11/19/08
SUMMARY[1]FICTION
[2]NON-FICTION
THANK YOU MA'M[FICTION STORY]/SUMMARY#1 :)
The story Thank You Ma'm is about an old lady who teaches a boy to learn from right to wrong. And what first happens is that...the lady[Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones]was walking alone i think near a park and all of a sudden a boy[Robert]tryed to get her purse. But then Mrs. Jones snatched her purse back but then the strap ripped. After that she kicks him in his sitter and tells him "pick up my pocketbook",she got him and held him and is shirt tight and bent down to get her purse. Then she said "aren't you to be ashamed of yourself", and he said "yes ma'm". And then she asked him why his face was so dirty and if there is someone to wash his face at home? And he said "NO ma'm". She told the boy that he will get his face washed that afternoon, they went to her house and Robert[the boy]saw that the door was open and figured that someone was there too.
Dear congressman,
Do you no what its like to be a student at Eagles Peak Charter School with no grass and a little bit of P.E space?We need grass and more P.E space so we can stay in shape. We also need more equipment so we can play more games and have more fun and actually have fun in P.E and not be bored.I think are school should get money because one of our main concerns is our computers we have twenty-five computers counting the six that don’t even work and we have 75 kids at our school. When we take assessments on the computer most kids have to wait until others are done and that wastes a lot of time.All that time we could be learning new things but no we have to wait around. Being a student at Eagles Peak School is not always easy for everyone there’s like hardly any space its so crowded I love going to school there but its gets really loud cluttered and HOT there’s just to many kids and so little space.We need the money so we could change all this and make our school better.And more space so we could get more students to join our school.And the money will help our school a lot we could start after school activities, we could have dances, fundraisers maybe we could maybe even get our cafeteria open.
DUE NOV. 19 2008
SUMMARY [1]NON-FICTION & [2]FICTION
2. Plot Diagram (save as a .jpeg and post as a picture)
3. Response to Literature
Lord Of The Flies
In lord of the flies there are rough and good times they have in the book. But later they forget the past and pay attention to the present and future. Two of the main characters are Jck and Ralph. They are the only main characters in the story. Jack; is a stubborn and mean person on the other hand Ralph; is such a bossy person!!!!
Some of the bad choices they made, are when they kill Simon and Robert. The reason they killed them both is because the other kids thought they were the beastie.Most of the main topics in lord of the flies are when they find the beastie. They say in the book that the beastie is a boar . Or an animal that comes out of the water. And they said the nbewastie has claws mand evil eyes.!!
Some of the details in the book are very interesting to me!! Jack finds the conch shell, and they use it to start meetings! And another is when they use the conch and then kids start coming out of the forest out of nowhere.
At the end of the book, all of the boys cry because they finally get recued. And Simon actually lives at the end! And the final sentence is what Lord of the Flies actually means! It means just like any other fable and reveals to the reader an intimate,disquieting connection between all the inoccent.
4. Autobiographical Incident (problem that you confronted)Incomplete
5. History: 8th Grade: Declaration of Independence Project, American Revolution Project (word & excel parts), Constitution
My Constitution
The first tip that I would do is make plans when I become governor. And let people know that I will be ready when they vote. And other tips would be like……????
Second, you would have to have the right opinions on what you want to change in our country. You would even have to have a lot of ideas to run a country and to make the laws.
Third, option that I would do is really pay attention on what I would want to plan on being governor. And the most important thing that I would do is take care of the state and other relatives.
Fourth and last, is I would make sure that all people would be treated equally. And have the rights to do what they would like. But, I will make consequences on those who convict a murder or anything that is not good.
Fifth, is that I would like people to be cared for with these laws and follow them the right way. If there is someone that doesn’t follow the laws the right way that means consequences.
Sixth, is the last one that I would choose is to make sure that people like the way you are going to run it??
So if I were in actual debate I would make sure to do the right thing before I do it in my election.
By: Bridgette Cryar
The Declaration of Independence
In my own words
That whenever any Form of Government becomes destructive of these ends, it is the Right of the People to alter or to abolish it, and to institute new Government, laying its foundation on such principles and organizing its powers in such form, as to them shall seem most likely to effect their Safety and Happiness.
When any kind of like destructive of any end, it is right for the people to the alter to abolish it. And to make a government, putting its foundation in supplements is organizing the powers in such form, as to them they shall seem to effect there safety happiness
King of Great Britain has forbidden his Governors to pass Laws of immediate and pressing importance, unless suspended in their operation till his Assent should be obtained; and when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to attend to them.
King of Great Britain has forbidden his governors to pass the laws of immediate and pressing importance, but if whom is suspended in their operation until his assent should be obtained; when so suspended, he has utterly neglected to go to them.
King of Great Britain; He has erected a multitude of New Offices, and sent hither swarms of Officers to harass our people and eat out their substance.
The king of great Britain erected multitude of newer offices, and had sent hither swarms of officers to harass, our people, and to eat out there substance.
He is at this time transporting large Armies of foreign Mercenaries to compliant the works of death, desolation, and tyranny, already begun with circumstances of Cruelty & Perfidy scarcely paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the Head of a civilized nation.
The king of great Britain as of this time transporting big armies of foreign mercenaries to compliant the works of death, desolation, and tyranny and already begun with circumstances of cruelty and perfidy paralleled in the most barbarous ages, and totally unworthy the head of a civilized nation.
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DUE: 11/19/08
SUMMARY[1]FICTION
[2]NON-FICTION
THANK YOU MA'M[FICTION STORY]/SUMMARY#1 :)
The story Thank You Ma'm is about an old lady who teaches a boy to learn from right to wrong. And what first happens is that...the lady[Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones]was walking alone i think near a park and all of a sudden a boy[Robert]tryed to get her purse. But then Mrs. Jones snatched her purse back but then the strap ripped. After that she kicks him in his sitter and tells him "pick up my pocketbook",she got him and held him and is shirt tight and bent down to get her purse. Then she said "aren't you to be ashamed of yourself", and he said "yes ma'm". And then she asked him why his face was so dirty and if there is someone to wash his face at home? And he said "NO ma'm". She told the boy that he will get his face washed that afternoon, they went to her house and Robert[the boy]saw that the door was open and figured that someone was there too.
Picture #3: the little fir tree is dieing now. and while hes burning he sees the children holding the star that was on him on christmas day. he will always remember that day. :)
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