JOHNNY ROUGH DRAFT

i think that tv violence has a negative impact on kids . because most kids watch 3 to 4 hours of tv everyday and its mostly younger kids that watch tv and since theyre growing their thoughts are changing and hundreds of studies say and have proven
that violence on tv is negative problem for the thoughts of young children
and their behaviors change because they become more aggressive and become angry and try to solve their problems with violence like people
on tv like wrestlers and those super heroes and try to

act the same in school because if they see a kid in school
doin something their not supposed and or bullying someone
they try to solve it so
they try to act like heroes and beat them up and then try to solve everything with violence
then they get so used to violence and becomes part of their daily life they become immune and numb to violence
so later on they get in to violent crimes and
you can prevent all that by things like a v chip or just try try to watch your kids and try to always have parent supervion on your children


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