People kill tiger for their own purpose or to benefit them.They kill tigers for parts of the tigers body.They also kill tigers when they move into the same regions where they are and kill them.Finally people may kill tigers accidentally with no purpose of hurting them.I may only mention three reasons but there a probably a whole lot more reasons to why people kill tigers.
Some people kill tigers for parts of their body like their teeth,fur,bones,and more .One reason why people kill tigers for their body is so they sell whatever they take from the tiger and get a lot of money.Another reason people kill tigers for parts of their body is for tigers fur to put on/in clothes to keep people warm.The final reason people kill tigers this way is to sell what they take on the black market for traditional Chinese medicines.People may say well we use their fur for warmth and it looks better than regular wool from a sheep.Yes we do use their fur for warmth and it does look better but when we take the wool from a sheep we don't kill it and it will grow back but when we kill a tiger you only get one use out of it.
People may also kill tigers when they move into the same regions as them and kill them.One reason this happens is people kill them out of a misguided belief that the tiger might hurt them while its looking for prey.Another reason is that people might kill them out of revenge because something could have happened or they just don't like them.The final reason this happens is when they move they need to make room so they cut down the tigers homes so their forced to go live somewhere else where they aren't adapted to and end up dying from a change of territory.People kill tigers this way with a whole lot of other ways that people kill them
People may also kill tigers when they are hunting for other animals like deer and other animals that people hunt.One reason this happens is the tiger will be hunting for prey and sees the bait that is set and the tiger gos for the bait and dies for being a hungry animal.Another reason that this happens is a tiger is chasing its prey runs over a trap and gets caught.The final reason is they get killed accidentally is if its harmlessly walking around when someone might see them and kill them out of fear.This is just another way that people kill tigers and their are still a lot more than this.
People kill tigers no matter what the reason is and they shouldn't because its very mean.People are killing tigers and few people really care about it.They probably think tigers are just wild animals and I shouldn't care if people kill them their not my business.People should care because if not people in the future will not be able to see them unless they see a picture of it or here about them.Plus killing tigers is illegal wherever you are.Thats why people should never kill tigers.
What I need to revise:
I need a new thesis
Reword arguments
Fix conclusion to each paragraph
Revised Essay
Why should people kill tigers for their own benefit?People kill tigers for parts of body like their teeth or their fur.People also kill tigers when they move into the same regions as them.Finally people may kill the tigers accidentally while they are hunting.I may only mention three reasons but there are probably a lot more reasons to why people kill tigers
Some people kill tigers for parts of their body like their teeth,fur,bones,and even more.One reason why people kill tigers is to sell what they take from the tiger for a lot of money.Another reason is people kill tigers for parts of their body is to use the tigers fur to keep them warm when it gets cold.The final reason people kill tigers this way is so they can sell what they take from the tiger and sell it on the black market for traditional medicines.People probably say well we use the parts from the tiger to benefit us so we should keep killing them.Well yeah it does benefit us but other animals that we already kill benefit us so we don't need to kill any more animals then we already do.That's why people shouldnt kill tigers for their own benefit.
People kill tigerswhen they move into the same regions as themand kill them.One reason why people kill tigers this way is they have a misguided belief that the tigers are going to harm them in some way.Another reason this happens is people want revenge on the tigers for being there and thinking their going to hurt them.The final reason this happens is they have to cut down the tigers home to make room for new houses and are forced to move to a new place and die from not knowing the new place.The tigers dont deserve to die but they do because people keep killing them.
People may also kill tigers when they are hunting for other animals people normally hunt like a deer which would then make killing them an accident.One reason this happens is the tiger is hunting sees the bait and goes to the trap,gets caught and dies from hunger or thirst.Another reason why tigers die this way is when a tiger walks, or runs over a set trap and gets caught and eventually dies from either hunger or thirst.The last reason why tigers die this way is if someone is hunting sees the tiger walkiing around harmlessly and kill them out of fear of getting injured.People may not mean it but it still hapopens which i dont think is fair to the tigers or anyone who likes tigers so when people hunt they should be more careful on what they kill or maybe thye shouold stop hunting all together.
Some people kill tigers for their own weird reason or to bene fit them in some way.People are killing tigers and nobodys really doing anything whether the killings are on purpose or an accident.People probably think well there just wild animals so why should I care.People should care because some tiger species are already endangered and soon there will be no more tigers and the only way people will be able to see a tiger is in a picture or picturing what other people say they look like.Thats why people should start caring about tigers more or else nobody will ever get to see a tiger again.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment