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In my opinion, the most important factor of school is to give it’s students knowledge. Without knowledge how could students make a life for themselves? How could they find a job? How would they be able to defend them selves in the future? They would need the knowledge and preparation to live a good life, that’s why it’s the most important task for teachers while us students can learn without much difficulty. Even though the other factors are important for our futures, how could they function without knowledge somehow being involved in the process? It would be the most important subject when it comes to the factors of school.

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In my opinion, the most important factor of school is to give its students knowledge. Without knowledge how could students make a life for themselves? How could they find a job? How would they defend themselves in the future? They would need the knowledge and preparation to live a good life, that’s why it’s the most important task for teachers while we students can learn without much difficulty. Even though the other factors are important for our future, how could they function without knowledge somehow being involved in the process? It would be the most important subject when it comes to the factors of school.