Very good reading of both. On the Julia Alvarez poster you need to check run-ons and spelling. O Raymond's run, you need to develop the plot more. There needs to be a separte message line. The quotes are also first rate as are the symbols.Mr. R
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Very good reading of both. On the Julia Alvarez poster you need to check run-ons and spelling. O Raymond's run, you need to develop the plot more. There needs to be a separte message line. The quotes are also first rate as are the symbols.
Mr. R
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